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Description

The deck is what financiers, sales agents and producers see before there is a finished script or a green light, and it usually gets four minutes of attention on a phone. We read it the way they read it, then tell you what happened.

Does the concept land on the first page. Are the story and the characters clear without you in the room to explain them. Do the tone and the comparables point at the market you are actually chasing, or at a different one. Would a busy reader keep going.

Decks up to 20 pages, with two to four pages of written feedback. Longer decks are read for a fee, though a 40 page deck is already telling the reader something you did not mean to say.

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Pitch Deck Notes

A read of the document you send before the script exists, and an honest answer on whether it sells the project.

Best for A deck going out before there is a script

You send Pitch deck or lookbook, up to 20 pages
Scope 20 pages
You get Written report
Turnaround 14 days

US$225

Delivery
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All fees in US$ Category — Script Services

After you pay

  1. 01 We email you an upload link
  2. 02 You send your pitch deck or lookbook, up to 20 pages
  3. 03 Your written report comes back within 14 days

Please note

Documents over the maximum length are still read, for a fee. Producers don't like reading bloated documents, and neither does the market.

If the report does not give you at least three fixes you can act on, tell me within fourteen days and I will do a second pass at no charge.

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